Analysis of Better looks!



I looked at him,
He looked at me.
And yes he was looking better again,
Couldn't disagree.
They say "beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder" ,
And I fell for him breaking my own shoulder.
I always wished if I could get over it,
But it was like quicksand gulping me underneath.


Scheme ABCBDDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1111 0111101001 10001 1110100110010 01111101110 1111111101 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 280
Words 54
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 220
Words per stanza (avg) 54

About this poem

When you look at the person, and admire them the most, may be it's only you who does that. Their beauty mesmerises you and may be only you. When I say "beauty" I don't mean just the appearance, it's both inside-out. And somehow you loose them, but the memories, how can loose the memories you made!? And those memories you cherish and can't get over it!

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Written on April 30, 2020

Submitted by anushreenayak2504 on June 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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