Analysis of Along the Battle



How a quiver of arrows
Had the purpose
To pierce my heart.
Bitter indeed
Are the arrows of strife.

How passion tasted
Is a foul tart,
It tastes rotten,
And tears apart.

How the marksman
Is the Devil,
Don't let him bring you down
To his level.
Nothing worth while
That he would adore,
Don't be like him
I implore.

How fighting the Devil
Is a battle
At our core.
He will throw everything at us,
even a whore.

How the wind chime
Dings once
And there is no time.
We see a losing battle
While heaven and hell
Is above and below,
Whether or not
We are on the wrong side
For the battle
Of our soul.

How sacrifice
Is not the fruit
Of the wicked,
But of the chariots of righteousness
And the glory of God's convicted.

How Jesus
Is the light
Who's rays reflect
The arrows of darkness
Deep in our hearts.
He saves us
From falling into hell
So we can fight back
After we've fell.

How in the end
Jesus makes a stand.
We fight alongside our King
With faith,
It's our fate
Before it's too late.
See how the armor
Of darkness
Binds us and blinds us,
Bitter indeed is a fallen state.


Scheme XABXX CBDB DEXEXFXF EEFAF GXGEHXXXEX XXCAC AXXAXAHXH XXXXIIXAAI
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110 1010 1111 1001 101011 11010 1011 1110 0101 1010 1010 111111 1110 1011 11101 1111 101 110010 1010 1101 1111011 1001 1011 11 01111 1101010 11001 101001 1011 111011 1010 1101 110 1101 1010 1101001100 001011010 110 101 1101 010110 10101 111 110011 11111 1011 1001 10101 11011101 11 1101 01111 11010 110 11011 100110101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,011
Words 209
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 8, 5, 10, 5, 9, 10
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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From I AM A MAN AS I SHOULD BE: POEM BOOK 1, on Amazon

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on June 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ronald-Bunch

ronaldbunch.com He did volunteer work, goes to church, reads, and likes long walks. He's a self published writer and poet. He's getting his GED and will graduate at Grand Rapids (USA) community college. Activity: Ronald Lee Bunch published his poetry book called I Am A Man As I should be on create space September 1st, 2014 (Paper Back) and August 31, 2014 (Kindle Edition) Audio book is now available at amazon. Interests: Writing, reading, walking. Favorite book types: Fantasy and writer/author biographies. Some of the books he read: Mainspring (Clockwork Earth #1), The Magician's Nephew (Chronicles of Narnia), The Holiness of God, The Outsiders, Clash of the Titans, Gulliver's Travels, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Harry Potter #2), The Four Signs of a Dynamic Catholic, Crossfire, Outland, Krull, The Red King (Star Trek: Titan, #2), Icerigger #1, Spellsinger, Flinx's Folly (Pip & Flinx #9), Battle Surgeons (Star Wars: Clone Wars, #4), The Silmarillion, The Lord of The Rings, The Hobbit, David Copperfield. more…

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