Analysis of Longing



Here I lie down
Longing for you
Longing for a love
I want to believe is true
A spiritual longing fraught with questions
After all my tears on this earth
Have I learned any lessons
After all my years since birth
Do I deserve any blessings
I long to believe
That you are what I have prayed for
I have lived a dangerous existence
Are you to blame for my breaths persistence
Is this the time
My time?
Our time?


Scheme ABCBDEDEFGHIIJJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1011 10101 1110111 01000101110 10111111 1111010 1011111 11011010 11101 11111111 1110100010 1111111010 1101 11 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 400
Words 81
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 325
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

Single, male never married, this would be apropos. Senior citizen? Well, I would not say so. Not yet anyway. But I met someone who has taken my breath away. Thus; Longing

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Palmer Wooten

I have published two books, the first self-published on a site I refuse to acknowledge, the second through w2k who did a great job. I am a welder from Baltimore Md. have traveled all over the US and abroad and I love to write it is my passion. more…

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