Analysis of He Won't Look

Alexis Angela 1998 (Florida)



He deceived me in every aspect of the word,
Betrayal was just another point in his virtual game of life.

Games all he Lives for, all that holds his glory
not me... because I am way to real.

I Can't grant him bonus points in his game.
I can't blow up shit and not create Havoc
In his game he can...

That is why he loves the game and I'm just a passing fancy.
I'll always stay because I allow him to fulfill his games.

All the cheating and lying and betrayals...are not real...they are simply his game.
His Game


Scheme XX AX BXX AX BB
Poetic Form
Metre 101101001101 01011010101100111 11111111110 110111111 1111101011 11111010110 01111 111110101101010 11101101110111 1010010011111011 11
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 501
Words 102
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this short poem expressing how I feel towards most young men in this lifetime when it comes to relationships.

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Written on April 28, 2020

Submitted by Lexii_angela98 on June 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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