Analysis of Can't Keep Me



Can't keep my eyes looking down.
Can't keep my feet to shuffle around.
I have found what makes grounded.
And my mind stays clear and sound.
To keep me up!
From a pity to bait it.
To keep me up!
From a pity to bait it.
To keep me up!
From a pity to bait it.
I ain't into that pity stuff.

When I strut my head is up.
I ain't into that pity stuff!

The faith I have to keep it real is not debated.
The faith I have to keep it real is not debated.
The faith I have to keep it real is not debated!
And when I strut my head is up.
I ain't into that pity stuff.

You can't keep me away,
From who I am here to stay.
No you can't keep me.
Oh no you can't keep me.

No you can't keep me away,
From who I am here to stay.
No you can't keep me.
Oh no you can't keep me!


Scheme xabaCDCDCDE cE BBBcE fFGG fFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 111111001 1111110 0111101 1111 1010111 1111 1010111 1111 1010111 11011101 1111111 11011101 0111111111010 0111111111010 0111111111010 01111111 11011101 111101 1111111 11111 111111 1111101 1111111 11111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 729
Words 169
Sentences 24
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 11, 2, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by lpahtillah on June 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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