Analysis of AJAX

JP. 1948 (United Kingdom)



In the blindest cold that is the deep
This predator will silence keep
And vent the smell of hydrogen
Displaced to failing oxygen
As oil pervades the foulest air
The diesel and shale aroma share
For all around and far above
The shifting sea has lost no love

In silence lies this fish of steel
All crushing force about its keel
Whilst Ajax searches through the grid
To find this killer deeply hid
And while they wait this raging calm
Will take its toll on the chanced arm
Of any man that makes a sound
As Ajax reads this killing ground

Stripped now to waist the pouring sweat
Of frightened seamen soaking wet
Avoid the cause of echoed noise
Hid from the sonar in turquoise
Yet still they wait in air most foul
Now rendered still by sonar scowl
And as they languish hidden well
The sonar searches pinging tell

A contact found, blue three four O
Deep six the charges rolled to go
Now wait and time explosive force
Of sinking death a charged discourse
And watch percussion through the brine
Have they had enough is it their time?
Again, again the side blast hits
To shake loose bolts and fall to bits

Now wait the debris and the oil
A slick depicts the victor’s spoil
But not convinced by a floated corpse
Pass one more time with no remorse
And then it comes that dull thud blast
As ten sub mariners breathe their last
In a bubbled torrent at Ajax stern
One more U boat of no concern


Scheme AABBCCDD EEFFXXGG HHIIJJKK LLMMXXNN OOXMPPQQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 00111101 11001101 01011100 01110100 1101011 010010101 11010101 01011111 01011111 11010111 1110101 11110101 01111101 11111011 11011101 1111101 11110101 11010101 01011101 11010010 11110111 11011101 01110101 01010101 0111111 11010111 11010101 11010110 01010101 111011111 01010111 11110111 11001001 01010101 110110101 11111101 01111111 111100111 001010111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,348
Words 262
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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