Analysis of "Elevators"



It has ups and downs and goes all around.
As you reach your final destination.
You will know when you arrive on the ground.
Feeling the floor of your current nation.

You are taking the big elevator.
Alone in a box full of new strangers.
Don’t confuse it with the escalator.
For those have far more humongous dangers.

Clicking on the floor, of which you want more.
Watching the small numbers change as it moves.
Dreaming of when it opens its doors.
Getting more nervous, you look at your shoes.

The doors are slowly opening wider.
Getting off you are now not a rider.


Scheme ABAB CDCD XXXX CC
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101101 111110010 1111101101 1001111010 111001100 0100111110 101110100 1111101010 1010111111 1001101111 101111011 1011011111 0111010010 1011111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 556
Words 104
Sentences 14
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem was inspired by my random word generator that chose the word "elevator".

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Submitted by s28026813 on June 10, 2021

Modified on April 11, 2023

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