Analysis of STRANGLING VINES



Strangling vines growing
Up along tree trunks climbing
Toward the heavens.

Gradually they murder
Their host tree, but not until
Drawing life from it.

But on this strange world
Strangling vines also feed on,
Passing animals.

When a careless creature
Passes within their range,
Strangling vines reach out.

Squealing in terror
Unwary beasts are pulled in,
Toward the host tree.

Then dragging them upwards
The vines start devouring,
The mammals alive.

Then spitting out bones
The vines are satisfied,
At least for the present.

Verdant life forms thrive
On this deadly planet,
Eating passing humans.

Humans are wary
Of entering the woods
And only do so at night.

Humans or beasts
All aware of the danger,
Of nearing Strangling Vines.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AAB CXX XXX CXX CXD XAE XXX EXB DXX XCX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 100110 1011110 01010 1000110 1111101 10111 11111 10011011 10100 101010 100111 100111 10010 0101110 01011 110110 0110100 01001 11011 01110 111010 10111 111010 101010 10110 110001 0101111 1011 1011010 1101001 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 770
Words 130
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

The 2nd poem in my Verdant World trilogy.

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Written on June 06, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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