Analysis of The Child



Young child,
Oblivious, reckless, meaningless troubles
No purpose does the child serve.

Throbbing hearts beat in my hand
Yet the child lay naked and starved.

A man I have become overnight.
The child’s youthfulness disturbs me.

Expecting his death, her death, my death
Become someone else’s young wife
While I prepare for her son to fall at my kee

I am ready to let this child go free.
Time is up!
I have baggage
I am damaged goods.

Don’t write, don’t speak, don’t think
Do you understand?

With my ego fully clothed
Nothing means nothing
And nothing needs talking about.

My men, my life, my fight, their fight.
No room for a child’s spirit
The child’s hands are clean, and mine dirty.

Find another likeminded sprout
One strike, two-strike.
I’m out.


Scheme XXX AX BC XXC CXXX XA XXD BXC DXD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 11 01001010010 1101011 1011011 10111001 011101101 011011 010110111 0111011 110110111111 1110111111 111 1110 11101 111111 1101 1110101 10110 01011001 11111111 1110110 011110110 101011 1111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 740
Words 131
Sentences 13
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 3, 4, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem was inspired by a young man who goes through war and leaves behind his young girlfriend. He talks about her as if she is a child and he is a grown man but the two are of the same age.

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Submitted by Lyricalhuman on June 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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