Analysis of Betrayal



You turned me in?

I thought we shared a spark. You touched me and then crushed me before I could understand,

I hold spark for you.

You saw in me what I couldn't see myself You took me, grabbed my hand and made me embrace you. I froze you let go.

Your chewing gum tangled in mine, origami star with your face. Your leg in a cast punk rock was the taste.

You gave it all and took it away, it's no longer mine the cd you made. The last time I sang karaoke.

Wild as fire and fast on your feet two souls so passionate opposing force's we meet.

Pretty, petite one night of hot passion complications so sweet, traditional and old fashioned.

You indulged my tastes letting me to explore showed kindness and patience and then simply no more.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1111011110111011101 11111 110111101111111101101111111 11011001111111100111101 111101101111010111101111010 1110011111111000101011 10011111100101101000110 10111101101110010011011
Characters 736
Words 143
Sentences 13
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 63
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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