Analysis of Im Sorry...
Raven Ayanami 1990 (San Francisco)
lm Sorry...
Im sorry I wasnt there...
Im sorry you felt like no one cared
Im sorry I didnt See you were broken and in need
I knew things were bad but I didnt know just how out of hand
I tried so hard to be a good friend
I tried so hard to show the Light
To give you hope and lift you up
Im sorry it wasnt enough
I sorry you couldnt trust
Open up
Terminal fear of dragging others down
Always feeling like life's Clown
The person you trusted the most
Made you into the biggest joke
Took everything and let you drown
Life dragged you down
So you took the "easy way out"
I can only hope youre above it now
Im sorry for all the grief
And sorrow that comes with your wings
Im sorry for all of these things
But most all Im sorry this is the End
Of your hopes and dreams
Of your future and the joys life brings
No more sunrise
No more song
No more laughter
No more love
You didnt just stop the rain...
You snuffed out the sunshine as well
I guess this is Farewell.
I will miss you forever Tina
Ill live For you,
My friend.
Scheme | XXXXXAXBXXBCCXXCCXXXDDAXDXXXXXEE XXA |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (34%) |
Metre | 110 110111 110111111 1101111010001 11101111111111 111111011 11111101 11110111 1101101 110111 101 1001110101 110111 01011001 11010101 1100111 1111 11101011 1110110111 1101101 01011111 11011111 1111101101 11101 111000111 111 111 1110 111 111101 1110111 11111 111101010 1111 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 990 |
Words | 210 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 32, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 400 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 105 |
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