Analysis of Once Upon A Time



Once upon a time
I was but a child
Innocent or blind?
Tame or wild?

Who is to say which one I was
I spent my time in a dream world
Where nothing bad could touch me
Or could it?

People don't seem to understand
That children are so fragile
No matter how strong they are
They can be broken with a word,
A gesture, a forgotten promise.

Teach that same child
Of unconditional love
Of deepest understanding
Of greatest worth
And you will have
Saved a Universe


Scheme XAXA XXXX XXXXX AXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 11101 10011 111 11111111 11110011 1101111 111 1011101 1101110 1101111 11110101 010001010 1111 101001 110010 1101 0111 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 453
Words 88
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by carlas.67227 on May 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Carla J Suggs

Masters in English/Creative Writing Currently writing several tales, one of which is the beginning of a science fiction series. I also write YA, romance, and fantasy; not necessarily in that order. I used to be an active poet on the old site. Luckily, I saved my poetry before the site tanked. I'm going to assume that all records of awards, publishing, and mentions are gone as well? A pity. more…

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