Analysis of Shoot out that career. ( lyrical poem )

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Shoot out that career......2......
From the bottom to top......2.....
Try to always make up..........2.......
Let, not the life flop........2.....

When you ask yourself,
That missing line,
Then you have to pay,
What's ever is the fine,

In that case, one has to sob.......12.....
Shoot out that career........

Every day at the end,
One must analyze,
Any unfair is done,
He must realize,

If not then, he is a cob.........12......
Shoot out that career.......

We must come over,
Our weak points,
Keeping always tight,
All the loose joint,

To keep running, like a gallop........12......
Shoot out that career..........


Scheme abcb xdxd eA xfxf eA xxxx cA
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 101011 11111 11011 11101 1101 11111 110101 0111111 11101 1001101 1110 100111 1110 1111101 11101 11110 1011 1011 1011 11101010 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 104
Sentences 17
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by brijmohan_p on May 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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