Analysis of "Where are you"?

Karthik raj 1998 (Kerala)



I sat alone in a haze
I know this ain't the right way
Thinking about my present
All I earned is regret
Thinking about my past
All I earned is regret
Hold on.... Save some
What about your future???
Better not regret any more

Is this the real life you crave for??
Is this the real face of you???
If not you'd better change
World is full of smarties
Look at the moon
It is speaking to you
You can find answers everywhere
But what about the face you lost???
I can't see it in the moon
I can't see it in the sky
All I have is some blurred memories
Come back.... Come back

I want to start from the beginning
I want to laugh like I do
I want to talk like I do
Where are you???
I can't see you
This face of me, isn't the real one
I can't fake it any more
I'm hyper sensitive
So I need you, badly I need you.


Scheme xxxAxAxxb bcxdecxxexdx xccccxbxc
Poetic Form Etheree  (47%)
Metre 1101001 1111011 1001110 111101 100111 111101 1111 101110 10101101 11011111 1101111 111101 111110 1101 111011 1111010 11010111 1111001 1111001 111111100 1111 111110010 1111111 1111111 111 1111 111110011 1111101 110100 111110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 775
Words 168
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 12, 9
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Karthik raj

Karthik raj 22 years old Cholkkalhouse p.o.pantheerankavu Pincode-673019 Phone number-6282926081 more…

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