Analysis of Horror & Vampire Haiku Set #007



THE ACID MAN (20/05/2021)
The Acid Man spreads
Hydrochloric acid,
Dissolving all insight.

THE ACID MAN COMES (20/05/2021)
The Acid Man comes
Out of a swamp of acid,
Spewing out his death

THE ACID MAN DESTROYS (20/05/2021)
Dissolving anyone
Who gets within his reach,
The Acid Man destroys.

THE ACID MAN'S FOOD (20/05/2021)
Dissolving people
Whose remains join his swap.
Is how he gets his food.

THE ACID MAN'S HOME (20/05/2021)
A swamp of acid
Is the Acid Man's home,
Provides his sustenance.

THE ACID MAN'S PLEASURE (20/05/2021)
Spreading chaos round
The Acid Man loves killing,
His only pleasure.

THE ACID MAN'S SWAMP (20/05/2021)
Like living molasses
The Acid Man leaves his swamp,
Hoping soon to kill.

THE BUGLER PLAYS (19/05/2021)
The Bugler playing
A tune of death and madness,
A tune of terror.

THE BUGLER SIGNALS (19/05/2021)
The Bugler signals
A time of constant death,
Time of constant fear.

THE DARKLING (19/05/2021)
Terror drawing near
Man-shaped but without features,
The Darkling lives on fear.

THE DARKLING FEEDING (19/05/2021)
The Darkling feeding
Upon fear and frustration,
Driving people mad.

THE DARKLING FEEDS (19/05/2021)
The Darkling resides
Within all children's nightmares,
Feeding on their fears.

THE DARKLING GROWS (19/05/2021)
Living off sorrow
Terror and our mistrust,
The Darkling grows stronger.

THE ICEMAN'S HERE (19/05/2021)
Turning people to ice
Turning deserts to oceans,
The Iceman's here.

THE ICEMAN SLAUGHTERS (19/05/2021)
Freezing people to death,
The Iceman slaughters,
Everything he detects.

INFERNO (19/05/2021)
Man of living fire
Inferno can burn deserts,
Or water in streams.

INFERNO AT WORK (19/05/2021)
Streets a fiery Hell
Buildings collapsing within,
Inferno at work.

INFERNO DESTROYS (19/05/2021)
Inferno destroys
Everything he encounters,
Nought resists his flames.

THE SLEEPER WAKES
Pale light of candles
Flickering round a casket,
As the sleeper wakes.

THE SWEETEST WINE
Flesh torn in frenzy
To get at the sweetest wine,
From a severed throat.

SWEETMEAT
Blood oozes from wounds
As an ancient creature devours,
The sweetest meat.

SWEET NECTAR
Jugulars severed,
To get at the sweet nectar,
Of a lovely throat.

TELL-TALE SIGNS
Signs of dealings with
The Undead: Tell-tale red marks,
On tender young throats.

THE THIRST QUENCHER
Hot liquid flowing
From severed jugulars,
Quenching evil thirsts.

TO FEED THE STARVING MASSES
Hungry mouths feasting
As arteries give up their,
Warm, sweet, red nectar.

THE UNDEAD AWAKEN
Coffins burst open
Upheaving their contents,
Releasing the Undead.

VAMPIRE BATS NIBBLE
Vampire bats nibble
Gently at your earlobe, then
Suckle at your throat.

A VAMPIRE CALLING
A vampire waiting
Outside your bedroom window,
Gently calls your name.

VAMPIRES
Vampires are clawing
At your eyes, at your throat,
Is it only a dream?

VAMPIRES SENSE LIFE
Vampires sense life;
Smell the blood of the living,
And move in for the kill.

VEILED FACES IN THE NIGHT (II)
Fearful of daylight
Beautiful veiled women,
Creep about by night.

THE WALKING DEAD
Crumbling gravestones mark
The resting place of people,
Still seen walking round.

WARNING SIGNS OF DANGER
Bats fly near your window
Warning you of danger:
Evil lurking near.

WAYS AND MEANS
Cleansing with fire
Or impaling with sharp stakes:
Ways to deal with vampires.

WAYS TO KILL VAMPIRES
Cleansing with holy fire;
Impaling with sharp stakes:
Ways to “kill” vampires.

WEDDING NUPTIALS
Fish-eyed stare on the face
Of a dead husband, returned
To his wife’s bed.

WINGED DEATH
Hordes of flying death
Winging above the city,
Seeking human prey.

WRAITH-LIKE CREATURES STALK
Wraith-like creatures stalk
Through dark, deserted alleys,
Hunting human prey.

YOURS TRULY FROM HELL
Nourished down the ages
By blood of killers, he
Becomes another Jack.

ZERO HOUR APPROACHES
Giant bat wings flap
Overhead while you sleep,
Zeroing in on you.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101 01011 110 01011 01011 01011 1101110 10111 010101 01010 110111 010101 01011 01010 101111 111111 01011 01110 101011 011100 010110 10101 0101110 11010 01011 110010 0101111 10111 011 0110 0111010 01110 0110 0110 011101 11101 01 10101 1110110 01111 0110 0110 0110010 10101 011 0101 011101 10111 011 10110 1001001 01110 011 101011 1010110 011 01010 101011 01010 10101 010 111010 0101110 11001 01011 101001 1001001 01011 01001 01001 101010 10111 0101 11110 1001010 10101 0101 11010 1110101 10101 1 11011 111010010 0101 110 110 1110110 10101 111 11101 011111 11011 0110 11010 1101 10101 1101010 10110 1100111 11110 01010 10110 1110 01001 10110 10110 101111 10111 01010 01010 111110 10111 10 10110 111111 111001 1011 1011 1011010 010101 1100011 1011 100110 10111 0101 10011 0101110 11101 101110 111110 101110 10101 101 10110 1010111 111110 11110 1011010 010111 11110 101 111101 1011001 1111 11 11101 1001010 10101 11101 11101 1101010 10101 11011 101010 111101 010101 1010010 10111 101111 100011 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 3,761
Words 617
Sentences 41
Stanzas 41
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 163
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Modified on April 10, 2023

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