Analysis of Tsunami



By Susy Taylor  09/18/05

One moment, all was calm and clear,              
With sounds of laughing children near.
The ocean's waves caressed the shore,
While overhead the seagulls soared.

A pair of lovers, hand-in-hand,
Were planting footprints in the sand.
And out at sea, their silhouettes
Betrayed the men who worked their nets.

So quiet and serene the sky~
No warning of the tears we'd cry.
Those laughing children, once so near,
Would suddenly just disappear;

For, as their parents watched them play,
The ocean swept them all away.
And what was once a thriving place
Just disappeared without a trace.

The ocean washed away the prints
Of all those years of innocence.
Those laughing children play no more
Upon that empty, barren shore.

But, at a time not far ahead,
Our God will call out to the dead;
Then, up they'll rise, for all to see
Jehovah's stronger than the sea!

Based on John 5:28, 29; Job 38:8


Scheme X AABX CCDD EEAA FFGG XXBB HHII X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11011101 11110101 01010101 1101011 01110101 0101001 0111101 01011111 11000101 11010111 11010111 1100101 11110111 01011101 01110101 1010101 01010101 11111100 11010111 01110101 11011101 101111101 11111111 01010101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 899
Words 160
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Susanna Taylor

Susanna Taylor, born in El Paso, TX, grew up in Hampton Roads, VA, developing a love for words and rhyme early in life, eventually being published with honorable mentioned at (the original) Poetry.com. more…

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