She, The Dream in My Sleep

i feel discovered when we talk. . .
you are the dream in my sleep
you are the air i want to breathe.
now my heart pumps blood so fast
like liquid fire through my body.
when now i speak to you. . .
i feel you are born inside my heart.
my lovely, how we can ask someone
to give us blessing that our love will last?
what holy thing shall we do?
burn a candle?
whisper to God in heaven?
what? i want to know.
the longer we talk in motionless time
the more my heart slowly burns within me.
love is the needle piercing our hearts,
threading us bound as one and the same.
my only link to love and understanding
is the passion erupting in my veins,
for a girl i once thought only a dream.
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Submitted by mijena6 on April 27, 2021

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 661
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Stanzas 1
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Jeffrey Lynn Naylor

Retired Professor of Literary Criticism, Philosophy, and Religion. Father of 6, grandfather of 6. A lover of all life has to offer. I have traveled the world, lived and worked among many cultures discovering that all people are essentially bound by a common thread. more…

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Discuss the poem She, The Dream in My Sleep with the community...

  • UJ
    Interesting topic. It gave me an idea of a poem I should write. I hope to be able to express as much passion as you did here.
    LikeReply 12 years ago
  • RoseofVenus
    Beautiful, well written. I love poems, more so writing than reading them. However, I’m glad I read this one today.
    LikeReply 12 years ago
  • brijmohan_p
    Wow, what a poem, in my view extraordinary. I never thought a poem could be of this nature. I am words less and speechless. I must have a copy of it for my viewing it any time. Please do. Thanks.
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • baby_p
    Love it
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • Leocribs
    so beautiful to be discovered after talking to the one you love. Subscribe to Leocribs Motivations on YouTube. Check out spoken words.
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • Leocribs
    You are the dream in my sleep what a beautiful line, for a girl I once thought only a dream . Great poem .. I love it.
    LikeReply3 years ago
  • MelitaCatWarren.09350
    Beautiful. I especially like you topic, one of my favorites. That is, love.
    LikeReply 13 years ago


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