Redemption



What do i have to do to redeem myself to you
What do i have to say, to make my dream come true
Im hopelessly in love, cant you see
I know i said somethings, but youre the one for me
Where do you stand now, please make up your mind
I just want one chance, one chance to make you mine
All i really want from you is a moment alone
What about the promises, the answers left untold?
How do i live my life, after all ive been through
You dont escape my mind, id love to love you
You left me in anarchy, shooting arrows with your eyes
Why the hate, so consummate, why have the smiles rundry.
Im knocking on the door of your heart, but someones already there
Cant believe a person like you can find so hard to care
...so hard to care
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Submitted on July 27, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCDEFAAGHHHH
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 711
Words 149
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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