im a girl



those days in the dark i stood unprotected
without the love i thought you gave to me
i felt unrested
with my foot on the ground
my eyes filled with love
im young and stupid
look at me
what you see is what you have done to me
with my hair falling
my teeth browning
im depressed
you are enjoying life
i am sick and unable to speak
unable to feel anything ,but cravings for your love
plz help me
make me feel alive
help me exist in the population
without your love i am dead
i am unknown
and in the exile
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDEBBFFGHIDBJKLMN
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 482
Words 103
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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