I just...



Love came by us in a way I have
never felt beefore.

Like a color tone we matched, no doubt.

We did the best we could, we did
everything I would ever have dreamt about.

Still our colors would just not dry together
My eyes remain wet.

You still are the one on my mind
when ever the sun-set.

Candles and soft music wont do the test.

In my dreams I beg for your return
so my heart could rest.

But When I wake up I remain in our
current stream of distance.

It never will pass. I always will be
flying in our jetstream of passion.

Because I know that you still love me.

Your's for eternity,
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Submitted on October 19, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA B XB AC XC D XD AX EX E E
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 567
Words 118
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1

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