I Hate This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Bombs bursting,
Guns blowing.
What brought the world to this?
It's as if everyone's heart stopped glowing.

It's really sweet what Veterans do,
But I have to say, I don't like it.
I mean, bullets flying overhead?
Sleeping in a pit??

War is sick, evil.
And I just don't want to have anything to do with it.
I have to admit, my family's been and is in it,
But, I can't make myself okay with it and just sit.

Why does everyone fight over the DUMBEST things???

Pulling loved ones apart,
Young children mourning...
Can't you see
It's just plain annoying????
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Scheme AAXA XBXB XBBB X XAXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 535
Words 101
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1, 4

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