A Shaftsbury Night



Just south of the chicken coop,
Along the rusted wire lines
That have coagulated into maple trunks,
A black sky lets Venus outshine a million stars,
And the wind rubs my head
in the grotto beneath my hooded sweatshirt.

The kitchen lights yellow the snow
Down the hills toward the house,
And I can see my son Richard at
The computer through the window--
An image framed on a TV in a dark room.

I will, without fanfare,
Watch the night sky change direction
Over the pine tops beyond the knoll.

I will stand here and
Follow my hot breath
Wisp clouds to the stars.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAXX BXXBX XXX XXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 544
Words 105
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 3, 3

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