Frantic



Locked in my mind.

Like an inescapable room.

Nowhere to go.

There is nothing to do.

But yell until my lungs give out.

I try and try to scream and shout.

When I do, silence comes out.

The madness is seeping out.

This is it.

I must have gotten to the point

where there is no way out.

I can't hide it anymore.

It's finally taken all control. You better run and hide.

The old me is not here anymore.

 

About this poem

"Frantic" vividly portrays the internal turmoil of someone grappling with an overwhelming mental struggle. The poem's intense imagery of being "Locked in my mind" like "an inescapable room" effectively conveys a sense of entrapment and despair. The repetition of phrases such as "try and try to scream and shout" only to have "silence come out" emphasizes the futility and frustration of the speaker's efforts to express their anguish. The poem progresses from a depiction of this futile struggle to a sense of resignation and acceptance of the madness taking over. The declaration "This is it" signals a turning point where the speaker acknowledges reaching a critical threshold—the "point where there is no way out." This admission marks the loss of control and the inevitability of change, culminating in the ominous warning, "You better run and hide. The old me is not here anymore." use of concise, stark language underscores the raw and unfiltered emotion of the speaker's experience. The poem captures the essence of a mental breakdown, providing a haunting glimpse into the speaker's psyche as they succumb to their internal chaos. 

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Written on May 21, 2024

Submitted by marlies.01420 on May 21, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X X A A A A X X A B X B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 411
Words 107
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Mariele Swinehart

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really captures the feeling of being trapped and overwhelmed in your own mind. The imagery is vivid and the emotions are palpable. The sense of frantic desperation really comes through in your words.

    One improvement suggestion could be to add some lines that offer a glimpse of hope or resolution. Maybe ending on a note of overcoming or finding a way out of the overwhelming situation could provide a more uplifting conclusion to the poem.

    Overall, great job on conveying such intense emotions through your writing. Keep up the good work and continue to experiment with different ways to express your thoughts and feelings. Your talent as a poet is shining through!
     
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