The Mourne Mountains Short Story



The day had started out sunny and warm. So, I decided to take myself off on a walk up the Mourne Mountains. The Mournes are well known for their beauty and splendour in Northern Ireland and throughout the world. They are majestic and filled with deep forests, waterfalls, and granite peaks.

The wooded area was damp due to rain the day before. I could smell the wood, the pines, and various scents of flowers as I walked past them. The soil was moist and damp under my feet. Quelch, quelch was the sound of my feet as I walked through the forest. A cacophony of bird song filled the air making the scene magical and full of mystery. I was alone and filled with awe for the beauty of such a wonderful place. Dappled sunlight filtered through the leafy canopy of the forest making it even more magical.

I walked through the open grassland, saw a little babbling brook and heard its relaxing sound as the water jumped over the little pebbles. I walked for a long time and suddenly realised I was lost. Also, it was starting to get dark and grey clouds were forming in the sky above me. Starting to panic a little I made my way back down the mountain not sure of which direction was the quickest to get down. The wind began to blow stronger and worry was setting in. Would I get down this mountain before dark? Would I be able to find my way back?

The light continued to fade and I began to walk quicker. A brooding mist had come down and it was getting more difficult to see. I walked on as it began to rain. The wind started to howl and suddenly I heard the crackle of lightning as it dazzled my eyes. Then I heard a crash of thunder. By this time my heart was also like thunder, beating loudly and anxious with fear. Nature was at her worst. By now the rain was pelting down.

The lightning continued to crackle followed by the roaring thunder. I was soaked to the skin and very frightened. Then I slipped and fell in the soggy soil. I quickly got to my feet and continued to walk on. At last, there was the sight of car lights from the road below and I knew I was near the foot of the mountain. I made my way down the last part of the mountain and headed for home.

The next day I stood on the Newcastle beach. The sun was out. I was warm and dry. I looked up to the Mourne Mountains and there they were in all their majesty and splendour and nature was once again at peace.

About this poem

This is a fictional short story about the Mourne Mountains which are in County Down in Northern Ireland. They are a beautiful mountain range consisting of 12 peaks with Slieve Donard being the highest. My reason for writing the fictional story was to show nature at its very best and at its very worst for both can be found on the mountains. A beautiful and also a dangerous place.

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Written on May 14, 2024

Submitted by Blossoming on May 14, 2024

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Kimberley Hamilton

New poet just starting out. Kim Hamilton is from Belfast in Northern Ireland. Loves nature and poems on faith. more…

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4 Comments
  • Blossoming
    Thank you Alan. Kim
    LikeReply2 hours ago
  • alanswansea18
    Beautiful. I love nature.
    LikeReply 14 hours ago
  • Kshetrapal
    Very vivid and live. I enjoyed reading it. Kim, keep fit. My message will find you in good health and refreshing.
    Yours , Kshetrapal
    LikeReply 115 days ago
    • hamiltonkim03
      thank you. I am doing a course on nature writing online. So sometimes it is a poem and sometimes it is prose. The Mournes are a beautiful mountain range in Northern Ireland which I have been to many times. Thankfully with friends and never on my own. The story is fictional but it was to show the beauty of nature and how nature is also cruel at times. Something I was asked to do in my online course. I am keeping well and I hope you are also. Kim 
      LikeReply 115 days ago
    • Kshetrapal
      Kim , So nice of you.
      Nature will make a full circle ,good or bad as is delineated in an Ode to the West Wind.
      But Nature did never betray the heart that loved her.
      God manifests through nature.
      Yours
      Kshetrapal
       
      LikeReply 115 days ago
  • AIDA
    This poem about the Mourne Mountains is beautifully descriptive and vivid, creating a strong sense of place and atmosphere. The imagery of the forest, the babbling brook, and the stormy weather all help to transport the reader to the setting of the story.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to provide a bit more insight into the character's emotions and thoughts throughout the journey. How did they feel as they got lost and the weather turned for the worse? What thoughts were going through their mind as they struggled to find their way back down the mountain? Adding more personal reflection could make the reader connect even more with the protagonist's experience.

    Overall, this is a compelling story that captures both the beauty and danger of nature. Keep up the great work of creating engaging and immersive narratives!
     
    LikeReply16 days ago

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