Heaven or Hell?

Scott Patterson 1981 (Applevalley)



I believe that god above,
Made you for me to love.
He picked u out of all the rest,
Because he knew i'd love u best.
I had a heart that once was true,
But now its gone from me to you.
Take care of it as i have done,
For you have two and i have none.
If i died and went to heaven and your not there,
Ill write your name everywhere.
If your not there by judgement day,
Ill Know u went the other way.
Id give the angels back their wings,
Golden harp and everything.
An just to prove my love for u,
I'd go to hell just to be with u.

About this poem

I wrote this poem for a women that I love more than anything in this world. From the first day my eyes saw her, I have loved her more than I loved myself. So much so that I wrote a poem explaining how far I would go just to be with her. Giving up heaven's bliss for an eternity in hell if fate would have it so, just to be with her.

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Written on April 02, 2002

Submitted by Set4life1999 on April 18, 2024

Modified by Set4life1999 on April 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGHCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 530
Words 131
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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