Day Dream



My mind conjures up a place more detailed than a colonial vase
That has an intangible grace

There is a plethora of delilahs specifically flowers, not the ones blamed by men like Samson
And  a field of carnations shaded crimson  

I am in a hundred-year-old bungalow with floorboards that sing when I step
and that were buckled by tears wept

The roof slants toward the horizon, and it is overtaken by ivy and vermillion blossoms
I take in its ominous beauty and listen to the bees buzzing in harmony

I then walk barefooted to a river that is so still it mimics porcelain
and throw in seeds of cardamon
Making the river swirl like agate
And waking me from my daydream of magic

About this poem

This poem captures the places we can go when we let our minds travel. It also shows how day dreams can be reminders or symbols for things we care about. One instance in this poem is when It mentions Delilah and Samson. Delilah has been blamed throughout history. The name has become a symbol of betrayal. It is said that she betrayed her love Samson, but the story is always told without the detail that he was a murderous abuser. Therefore being an example of how society blames Woman. This became a symbol in the day dream hinting to feminism and how in my dream world misogyny is nonexistent. So instead of the world having woman who are unfairly criticized, it just has flowers which by chance are also called delilahs. Another symbol in this poem is how humans tend to ruin things deemed perfect as a habit. In the dream there is this still lake that the subject of my poem ruins, by creating ripples with a seed they tossed. 

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Written on February 10, 2024

Submitted by S25400242 on February 13, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB XX XX BBXX
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 681
Words 132
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 4

Caroline Alperin

A 16 year old high school student from Arizona. Started writing poetry in 2020 and has been enthralled with it ever since. more…

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