My cold water burns me
Daniel Waring 2009 (Mbabane)
My cold water burns me.
I burn in ecstasy; I feel the pain,
wondering if I was ever sane.
Standing as the water burns my skin,
the toll on my body, the ecstasy within.
I want to leave but can't,
I want to live but I won't,
as the walls cave in, I feel condoned.
The water keeps falling, and the pain grows,
pushing and pulling, begging for more.
As the water continues to flow,
I feel the pain deep in my core.
All I could think about were the days of yore
when I could leave, fly, and soar.
The door is right there,
but if I leave, they will all stare,
as I am tangled in a fight between ecstasy and despair.
Will I slowly fall and become impaired?
As the water gets hotter,
and the steam clouds my view,
I wonder and ponder
what happened to everything of value?
And as I burn in the water of ecstasy,
I close my eyes, knowing this will continue endlessly.
About this poem
about addiction and not being able to escape it
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Written on January 26, 2024
Submitted by dannywaring21 on February 20, 2024
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 862 |
Words | 196 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 3, 6, 4, 4, 2 |
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