Lonely woods

Derek Hamersly 1998 (Santa Cruz)



This trail is carved coarsely now
through these lonely woods.
Just one or two flowers so far
but the bees don't know of them.
Flies and mosquitoes hover in nearby shadows.
If I don't breathe, will they hover by?

Oh, to fly like a fire-red leaf in this warm breeze!
Spinning round and round without intent,
with hundreds of others flying just the same.
And they never know they are falling--
yet somehow smiling they let go.
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Written on March 02, 2024

Submitted by derek_3 on March 02, 2024

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 432
Words 88
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 5

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