Time’s Comedic Architect



Time’s Comedic Architect


The vision in the mirror illustrates
reflections of an aging woman’s face
Gnarled lines enshrine
the many years embraced
But starlight in her eyes still radiates

The lips are pale and drawn a little thin
The teeth once bright have grown
a wee bit dim
The jawline softly hangs with sleepy skin
But faithfully, her beauty glows within

The thickened neck still holds the head erect
The arms and hands are weak,
with frail effect
The breasts no longer plump, profiles detect
But she laughs at time’s comedic architect

The dimpled belly sits a little round
Upon the hips more padding can be found
Downy wisps grow scanty on the mound
But longings deep within her still abound

Once shapely legs have lost their sex appeal
Swollen knees makes it difficult to kneel
The ankle bones more often are concealed
But her feet yet strong,
still walk her through the weald

The aging woman’s changing self belies,
grays and wrinkles
that are but the years’ disguise
Brilliance emanates yet,
from her thoughtful eyes
And her brave and youthful spirit still abides

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Written on January 05, 2024

Submitted by susan.brumel on January 13, 2024

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Scheme A BXXXB CXXCC AXAAA DDDD EEXXA FXFXFX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,095
Words 201
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 4, 5, 6

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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