It's Not a proposal

Maestrimadman 1976 (Kolkotta)



I saw you passing me after long days 
You came to my life like the morning rays 
You'd disappeared without leaving a clue 
It's lovely to see you decked out in blue -

For me heaven is the place where you are 
Same place turns to be hell if you go far 
Divine love lovers can say to our love 
Our pair's eternal like a pair of dove 

Your eyes are oceans very very deep 
Pictures only of me you please do keep 
You have hypnotic beauty,I felt 
Bowing to your divinity,I knelt 

Your lips are like the petals of a rose 
Why keep a distance?Please come close. 
My heart is the place where you always dwell 
I praise your beauty but plz don't swell 

It is not a praise but a feeling of mine 
One day I hope, together we may dine 
You can only approve or deny me 
I shall just have to wait and love to thee 


  

About this poem

It is an imagination based on my youth.i wrote it when i started teaching in a secondary school.

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Written on October 06, 2005

Submitted by maestromadman on December 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF XXGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 831
Words 170
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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