A Wonderful Day!



It was a wonderful day
Oh what a wonderful day
Let’s go down to play
Oh yes oh yay let’s play
Climbing down the stairs
Down and down the stairs
Running down the stairs
Are we almost there
We are almost there
Now we found the bottom
Step down to the bottom
What game sounds like fun
I know what is fun
See this!
Show me that!
Show me that!
Show me!
Show me!
Do it now!
Do it now!
Now!
Now!
Now!
Now!
Now!
No!
No!
No!
Please stop!
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Now wasn’t that grand!
So grand!
A wonderful end to a wonderful day
Oh yes oh yay what a wonderful day

About this poem

This poem is an exploration into how repetition and flow can effect the reader’s mood. This poem is also a personal one delving into a story I am not quite ready to reel any other way yet.

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Written on December 04, 2023

Submitted by jlayman06 on December 05, 2023

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Scheme aaaabbbccddeefGGHHIIIIIIIJJJk llaa
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,427
Words 141
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34

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