My Snow
The Snow
The wind, the ocean, the clouds, my snow
All blur in my eyes as my vision becomes slow
My mom to my left and dad to my right,
As i sit on the snow without a whimper in sight
My brain is malfunctioning
My eyes are all teary
As i sit in the snow
My face feeling dreary
I wish upon a star for all i have lost
Yet my feet are crossed
And my eyes are shot
A tear in my eye tries to run home
But nevertheless i sit in the snow
The snow is my home and nothing can take it
But my snow is my snow and it can be wicked
My sister appears with tears in her eyes
But i know that her snow as well is twisted
I sit up in sight to see to my right
But all i see is my dad and my snow
I get up on my knees but fall again to my snow
It seems my snow is too big for me to live
But God is the shovel and will clean it in a hustle
I get back up to my knees
But snowballs hit my face
As I sit there in worry as my face becomes gory
As my snow hurts me by scarring my life I pray to God and become more suffice
I get back to my knees one final time and i smile
I have never done that
Not once
Not twice
Not evan thrice
I am strong
I am amazing
I step in the snow and get to my feet
And I stand on the snow as it accepts defeat
I know life is all about sneak peeks and tweets
But go to God and life will be sweet
About this poem
This is about our snow which represents are issues in life
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Submitted by Jr.kimble on December 04, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AABBCDADEEFGAHIJIBAAKLMNDOPQROOSCTTJT |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,298 |
Words | 302 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 37 |
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