I try to find it until I can't breathe



I try to find it until I can't breathe
What is the best in this world?
 
Is the Technical knowledge of the scientist sending an orbiter to Mars?
Is a pleasure of Love where lovers are getting bliss through kissing their lip to lip?

Is the knowledge of Dr. Faustus who was fallen as damned soul to Lucifer?
Is the wisdom of Karl Marx who wanted to achieve a classless Society in the world?

Is the principle of The prophet, Christ gave a miracle on the mountain of Galilee one day?
Is the survival of the corona that came into everyone as a miraculous creature and kept us dead and alive?

Is a glass of water available in the desert?
Is the contaminated food given to the hunger of sinful lives?
Is a rupee in the hands of children begging on the streets of India?

How many objects? how much wisdom?
The best of all things is grace,
 my human mind tells.
 I suddenly woke up and
 heard the noise
 A child cried next door
 It's a pity I thought I'd help
 God thanked me for that too
 Next night
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Submitted by drmkannadhasan on November 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XX XA XX XXX XXXXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,007
Words 210
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 9

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