A message to you.



Message To You

I've been trying to get this message to you.

The hate you feel is not with me, it's inside you.

I've been through what you've been through.

I wondered why you always threw it at me,

I understand now it was easier for you to be.

I was devastated and lonely when you disposed of me.

I can't change you, but I've learned how to protect me.

Our lives were hard, not for the weak. The anger still speaks.

I've been trying to get this message to you.

The hate you feel is not with me, it's inside you.

I've been through what you've been through.

I felt your pain and hurt and I protected you.

All I wanted was the same from you.

I've got the rest of my life to live without you, and I'll miss you.

It'll take a lot of work to remove your residue.

My protection exists without the existence of you.

By Joelle Miller

About this poem

This poem is about a very sad and traumatic time in my life. I have no professional experience, but writing has helped me to heal from the experience.

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Written on October 17, 2023

Submitted by writerlife0125 on October 19, 2023

1:02 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme a A A A b b b b x A A A a a a a a x
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 841
Words 196
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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