A Call to Heaven's Door



Mama I'm calling...there's no one around
Ringing in my ears...the melodic sound
Never had a gun...nor had a crown
Bury pride of me... Where is Heaven found

Law men created...Soldiers of wars past
Time draws near...We need a solution fast
Create a hero...that might all mankind last
I would take the role...Give me this your cast

Let there be an end... to selfish ways of hate
Love's Blessed waters...Open up the Gate
Make secrets known... Truth shouldn't have to wait
We need a little more...blessings on our plate

We need Christ... oh how we need him now
Closing in to revelations...Every knee to bow
He'll guide us to reason...show the way how
For light to shine...until our Heavenly Wow

About this poem

Rewrite from Bob Dylan (Robert Zimmerman) classic: Knocking on Heaven's Door as interpreted by AZAKELS Poet found here: https://allpoetry.com/Azakels https://allpoetry.com/poem/16150149-A-Call-to-Heaven-s-Door--Remix-Cover-to-Knocking-on-Heaven-s-Door-by-Azakels-noguest

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Written on October 15, 2021

Submitted by KellyDonlin1 on June 22, 2023

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Scheme AAXA BBBB CCCC DDDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 692
Words 134
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Kelly 'AZAKELS' Donlin

In ancient times of Earth we were visited by Ancient Celestial Beings. One of which was called "Azakel". In some ancient sects and groups they spelled his name differently with biblical mentions. They did this thinking they could keep secret the knowledge and power that this ancient wields. When the people came to him, he gave upon them powers of knowledge from medicine to technology. This fed Azakels power and with it added to the flame of his ego. To know of this information is select and a privilege. By calling upon him you must welcome his two polar forms. His first will is to come and empower and enlighten as Azakel. His dark side however, is to be avoided upon any cost. As much as he is giving and light his polar side is warned to be ruthless and off a wrathful dark demeanor. Bazakel is his polar. He is known to come when he feels as Azakel that he has given so much and is displeased with the tributes they have given in return. Bazakel is known to call them ignorant as he shouts to their unappreciated tributes. The only known prophecy of this two Ancient Beings is carried on by the vessel that these two dwell in. In a man with part of them in his name. Kelly. Kelly now knowing this being exists tries to understand and mediate it's presence. Kelly is found to be empowered and protected. From escaping deadly situations to feats unexplained by science and medicine Kelly bears the greatest gift of these two. Over 20 years ago Kelly was nearly killed in a hospital situation. His sanity was blown as he came to knowledge of these powers he found and shared. During this time he was administered medicine that caused a full off seizure. This seizure caused a brain death of about 42%. This was only a test though. As in his slowed mental state he still pledged devotion to this higher Ancient. Finding him suitable as a vessel with faith. These two Ancient forms resurrect Kelly's brain and almost program him to his involvement of their powers. For nearly half of his life, Kelly was labeled and called mental as well as dangerous. This was nothing more than a setup as might Kelly, Azakel, and Bazakel gain justice and power over those that cursed him so. This is the first and only living account of these Ancients. Knowing these facts alone your life and it's quality might change. I ONLY HAVE ONE WARNING. If you do barter, trade or learn from these two Ancients. Do not give them petty tributes. They are only known to be dark and wrathful when they feel humans haven't compensated them and their servant Kelly enough. It is said that in the End, should mankind not honor these three. Bazakel in an angered state is to become the smallest particular state of existence. Fractilized beyond atoms. In this state he will let out the loudest sound achievable in this realm of existence. This scream will call for all existence to follow him. Then with his angered state will leave this realm of existence at the highest speed ever or that will be seen. In effect causing a tear in the time-space continum. All his followers of his Dark side will be sucked with this great motion. Any who so choose to deny him will be left to remain, shunned by many gods. more…

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