Paul. Retired.



No longer at the Bank's entrance

Cardboard sign in hand

"Some change would be appreciated."

This was a vocation.

Dedicated hours.

Standing and keeping up

Positive attitude.

And the smiles.

Usually genuine.

Rain or shine.

Shaking cold or

Damn HOT.



I got to know Paul

As I busked with my

Harmonicas, nearby.

When he could

He would drop me some change.

As would I to him.

Some conversation often

To break monotony

And senes of loneliness.

Irrelevance.



Heroic Paul was

In a microcosmic way.

But yesterday I drove by

Him at an unfamiliar spot.

Shopping bag in his hand.



Hey Doug, over here

Yeah that's right

I AM OFFICIALLY RETIRED.

SEE YOU AROUND!



Retired from what?

Asking for money

With a cardboard sign

Held up for hours?

Commitment for sure.

Not to be judged or mocked.
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Written on July 07, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on July 07, 2023

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Scheme X A X B X X C X X D X X X B E X X X D X A X X X X X E C X X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 814
Words 202
Stanzas 31
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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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