Drown In Obsession
My eyes flutter open
Few droplet of water sat on my lashes
I felt a dull pain in my heart
Although where do i stand?
My love fade for you
The plummeting of my grieving heart
Seek you dearly
How i wonder why you never see my love for you
How i wish you look me in the eyes
I know that no matter where i stand
I will be right beside you
I will wait for your love to be showered on me
My love, Please do cherish me
For i will give you my love
But can you fill the hole in my heart
Can you not spread your happiness inside me
Let me be your other half........
Your soulmate.......
About this poem
When writing this poem.....word cannot express how one pour out their love to one another. It's like waiting for your other half or soulmate. It's also express how one feel depressed that he/she is not receiving that love back but obsessed with pain.
Written on May 30, 2023
Submitted by anitaomorebokhae on July 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 593 |
Words | 141 |
Stanzas | 17 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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