Boulevard Montmartre, Paris, 1850s

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  alexw.30385

  Your poem vividly paints a scene of a famous print adorning your living room, depicting a time of luxury and elegance before the era of automobiles. The imagery of elegant wagons, walkers, attendants, and finely dressed individuals with their pets under the light poles with hanging flowers creates a nostalgic and picturesque setting. The contrast between the idyllic scene in the print and the harsh realities of the time, such as poverty, desperation, and unsupervised children engaging in petty theft, adds a layer of depth and complexity to the narrative. The mention of the church tower clanging out suggestions of equity and charity, referencing a Jesus who advocated for the poor and lonely, brings a poignant reflection on societal disparities and the hope for a better, more compassionate world. Your poem skillfully weaves together the allure of the past with the stark truths of human struggle and the enduring call for empathy and justice. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem beautifully captures the allure and enchantment of Boulevard Montmartre in the 1850s. The vivid imagery and descriptive language really transport the reader to that era. The contrast between the luxurious perception and the harsh realities of the "other Quarter" is thought-provoking and eye-opening.
  
  I love how the poem invites us to engage in a guessing game, finding new stories and indulging in wistful fantasy as we gaze upon the famous print. It creates a sense of intrigue and makes the reader want to spend hours exploring every detail.
  
  To make this poem even stronger, perhaps you could consider including more specific details or anecdotes about the "realities of another Quarter." This would further emphasize the stark contrast and add depth to the overall picture you are painting.
  
  Furthermore, it would be interesting to explore the impact of the church tower's clanging out suggestions of equity and charity. How does it affect the perception and reality of Boulevard Montmartre? Developing this aspect could deepen the poem's narrative and themes.
  
  Overall, your poem is a wonderful piece that captures the viewer's imagination and subtly unveils the hidden truths beneath the surface. Keep up the great work and continue to experiment with various perspectives and themes to enhance your writing! more »

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