What Remained



I tried to do it my way for
So many years and years.
Concerns and problems and much more
Were fueling restless fears.

I thought and prayed and thought and prayed
Why I did not have gains,
But losses and success delayed
Because of what remained.

Decisions that I made had not
Been brought before the Lord.
What little value that I got
Was of my own accord.

So, fears and pride were pushed away
To make room in my heart,
Because I prayed that love would stay;
The love God did impart!

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Written on June 20, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on June 20, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on June 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CXCX DEDE FGFG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 485
Words 104
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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