The Burden of a Mirror

Riordain Murphy 2005 (Wiarton)



A man approached me, dressed in shining gold;
The suit was one I’ve seen ten times before.
Behind him lurked a man who seemed quite old,
His scars told me he fought the recent war.
 
A day ago, I saw a pair of twins.
Their variance was clear to me like glass.
I might excel at memorizing skins,
But all I want is vision through their mass.
 
I see it all, except the vital parts
That make a person who they truly are;
I cannot see the pureness of their hearts.
To know their figure does not bring me far.

I yearn to know what stocks each person’s mind.
I might see all, but I am truly blind.

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote to bring attention to the way we perceive and judge people, pushing the message to the audience that we could see every inch of a person's physical body, and we would not know a single thing about them, as what makes a person is what is on the inside. To convey this message, I wrote an altered states poem from the perspective of a mirror.

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Written on April 25, 2023

Submitted on June 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 609
Words 134
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2

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