Eternal Whiskers: A Feline's Legacy



In somber verse, I'll tell a tale,
Of life and death, a heartfelt wail.
A feline friend, now lost to time,
A cherished bond, sublime.

Simon was his name, a cat so fine,
With emerald eyes that seemed to shine.
He came to dwell with young Alex, true,
An 11-year-old lad, with heart so blue.

Their days entwined in playful bliss,
Chasing dreams in a world amiss.
Simon pounced on sunbeams' gleam,
While Alex laughed, a joyful stream.

Together they roamed, both wild and free,
A bond so pure, for all to see.
Through childhood's fields, they'd run and play,
With Simon leading the adventurous way.

But time, cruel and unrelenting,
Silently crept, without relenting.
Simon aged, his steps grew slow,
His spirit waning, a fading glow.

With each passing day, his breath grew frail,
And sorrow wrapped young Alex's tale.
He held dear Simon in tender embrace,
As tears fell, like rain on a sorrowful face.

The sun dipped low, the twilight sighed,
As Simon, now still, forever lied.
Alex wept, a river of pain,
For a friend lost, never to regain.

The world felt empty, devoid of light,
As darkness conquered the once bright.
But memories lingered, a comforting balm,
In the depths of Alex's grieving calm.

For Simon's essence would forever reside,
In a special place where love can't hide.
Though his mortal form may cease to be,
His spirit lives on eternally.

Now Alex, grown, with a heart made wise,
Carries Simon's spirit 'neath tearful skies.
In every feline's playful purr,
Simon's love, forever, will stir.

So let this elegy be a reminder, clear,
That life's fleeting moments, we must hold dear.
For in the embrace of love's sweet breath,
Death's sting is soothed, and conquered, by faith.

About this poem

This poem is about my recently deceased cat Simon. He died about 2 months ago. I think writing a poem can help me cope with his side death.

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Written on June 04, 2023

Submitted on June 05, 2023

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ AAKK LLMM NNOO LLGG PPQQ RRXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,695
Words 345
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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