crescent moon



we sat and we watched the sunset
the bright crescent moon peeked out
from behind the soft purple clouds
as if letting our hearts know
that we didn’t have to see the dark side
of things

you sat and watched the sunset too
as calm as the breeze, taking in the silence
as loud as the colors in the sky
something about that night was beautiful
more than just a word—beautiful
like you

i sat and watched the movie in my head
as it played and replayed
the endless journey of love
and hoped that somehow, someday
we could make it more than just
fiction

the bright crescent moon sat and watched us
as the last rays of sunlight slowly disappeared
beneath the hazy horizon
it, too, slowly drifted into the soft purple clouds
taking with it the last bit of light i saw
in us.
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Written on January 29, 2023

Submitted by cxrlito on May 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXXX BXXCCB XXXXXD EXDAXE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 770
Words 149
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6

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