The Train Passengers



The Train Passengers:
see how they sit!
Leisurely they relax.
On the windows they recline.
At the fast-moving scenery they mope.

An instinctive question emanates:
Is it the train moving
Or the earth?

Inside others sit:
Pondering about the journey--
Ideas ruminating in the head.

Soon, he lapses into slumber;
 his unsteady trunk
jolting forward
and backwards:
half-asleep
half-awake.

At this station
we stopped
some embarked
others disembarked.
Hawkers canvas for sales:
"Akara","Akwa..."
"...Nmai"..."mmiri..."
"...Bread this way..."

Anxious voices
Eager voices
Curious voices
Explode:
"...My money..."
"...Thief...thief...thief"
"...My luggage..."
"Give me my money..."
"My bottle...throw...throw..."

"Don't touch me
you dirty hag!
"Move!"
"This is not your house!"
He shifted and looked away
He sat down and sighed:
An unhealthy silence prevailed.

Here he comes--a mendicant:
"Help a poor beggar
And God will help you".
"...Thank you..."God will bless you..."
"May your journey
Be safe...May you see good
In all your life."

About this poem

As I sat in front of our house, at Aba, during my undergraduate days, a train zoomed past our house, and this poem came into being. I remembered the '60's, when the train was our major means of travelling to our village. The only means of travelling on the road was by lorries.This involves sitting on top of goods being convened by the lorries. A train journey that is supposed to last for one hour, could last up to twenty-four hours! At times, we ended up sleeping at the railway stations. Great dramatic scenes were enacted whenever a train arrived at a station. There was a story about a dirty Hausa trader, who sat beside a woman. The angry woman threw away the Hausa man's mat containing his money. In quick retaliation, the angry Hausa man quickly snatched the woman's baby and threw it out of the window of the moving train. The train had to be stopped before scores could be settled. 

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Written on April 18, 1981

Submitted by Chinonyeisraeluche on May 01, 2023

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXX XXX ABX CXXXXX XXXAXDCD EEEXBFXBC BXFXDXX ACGGBXF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,034
Words 204
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 3, 6, 8, 9, 7, 7

Israel Chinonye Uche

Date of Birth: 18/9/57 Nigerian; Igbo BA(Hons) 1982,Theatre Arts, University of Calabar; PGDE, 1987,University of Nigeria, Nssuka Secondary School teacher( retired). Author and publisher more…

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