Down in room 365



Down in room 365 lives a man and a women
The women who is pregnant
She lives for herself
The man who drinks
He's cruel to her

Down in room 365 it's dark and cold
No life
No breathing
Only blood
Only tears
A mother lives but a child dies

Down in room 365 it reeks of blood
The mother walks faraway
Blood of her child on her hands
A husband lays cold on pavement
Its like a maze

Down in room 365 no one survives
But a mother lives through blood
How did she live
How could she
With the blood of her child on her hands?

About this poem

This is another one of my depression free verse poems

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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by dena.lombardo.26 on March 08, 2023

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXX XXXBXX BXCAX XBXXC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 113
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 5, 5

Dena Lombardo

My name is Dena Lombardo, I am 17 years old. I live in Poplarville Mississippi, and I am suffering from depression. I started writing poems when I was in the 8th grade. I always found that it help me sink into my own world. more…

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