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I've fallen

Toni dulaney

Like a fallen angel with no wings I've finally fell,
Leaving heaven for my new found he'll.
Broken pieces of my past lay shattered all around,
I yell for somebody anyone but there is no sound.
Everyone from my past the love I had,
Broken me down everytime he got mad.
All the hurtful words they're worse than he'll,
Is my heart still beating  I can't tell.
It hurts so bad I wish it would stop,
Fall out of my chest and just drop
Nothing right now makes any sense,
I lost my whole world at another's expense.
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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by Prettybrowneyez089 on February 25, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDDBAEEFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 509
Words 109
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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