Men at it…

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



So what’s to talk about?
Got your coffee?
Hockey, school teacher Trudeau
Your backroom reno coming along.
Next June’s trip to Temagami.
But that sour face of yours?
What gives, Alex.
Oh, not so much
Don’t want to put the
Damper on things.
Bill pipes in.
No really, Alex
I think you should.
Put to a vote. Two hands raised.
One abstaining.
And so it began.
Falteringly.
The real reason for this Sunday morning.
Next time probably
It would be easier.

About this poem

Men have trouble becoming real, transparent, vulnerable. Pity.

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKGLMNOPNBQ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 95
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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