What Kills Me The Most



-What kills me the most

The fall was the hardest I’ve ever had
The pain was the deepest I’ve ever felt
To be so true without a thought of doubt
It seemed to be taken away as easily as it came
Our love is one ,our battles are another
Distinguishing the two was only half the struggle
No matter what side we took it separated us from eachother
From the words said in vein acted as swords and knifes cutting and stabbing our hearts in a million ways
Even with the pain and hurt one truth always remained
The love we found was something that could never be restrained
Through it all our pain only amplified
The damage done was enough to shatter the coldest of hearts
With time and distance that never healed us back together
Our passion and attraction always seemed to captivate a new hello
A second chance it seemed to be with no lesson  learned
Again and again the the same elements made the result
What was once a place of grace and magic turned into a place of torture
Two worlds pulled apart
For the best we could say
Time does not heal all wounds
growth within kills the person i was
Molding the man you need today
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Submitted by Reytorres4695 on January 20, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXAXAXBBXXAXXXAXCXXC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,140
Words 233
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 22

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