Almighty Creators

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)

Almighty Creators of this experience,
Lived and witnessed to be life.
Will expose what should be shown.
At the right time.
And when, where and to who,
Made to make it known...
That a duping to dispute truth to deceive,
Not too often accepts excuses or apologies...
For the admitting of committing,
Of fraud, betrayal, treachery and self interest.
As a way to display...
One's loyalty and undying patriotism!

As sanity kept be the eye opener to reality.
Done to announce publicly,
One's active participation...
In directing when, where and to who,
How to successfully destroy...
The foundation of one's own quality of life.
With instructions given.

There's more.
Then introducing,
An array of images of oneself...
Posing as heros already fictioned.
Printed on cards as if collector's items.
At a price paid by supporters to promise,
Will increase in value over time.

Stop making up stuff.
Then attempting to entertain,
With such ridiculous exaggerations.
No one in their right mind,
Would do something so increasingly...
Repeatedly, step by step outrageous B.S.
Done with a doing to convince,
Millions of people to support and endorse...
This sick mind blowing madness!'

'That's what I thought too.
I began to pray.'

Pray for what?'

'The punchline.
I wanted to understand the joke.
Then it began to dawn on me.'


'The Almighty Creators?
Those unseen Deities God calls 'We'?
Had no intention to make this experiment,
A serious event at all.
We took that to do upon ourselves.
Check it out...
Those who are intelligent.
And oozing,
With competence and common sense.
Are the last ones considered,
To hold and sit in seats of leadership.
Rare are the exceptions.'

'What are you saying?'

'The Creators of Our Existence,
Had intentions of creating Earth...
As their entertainment mecca.
Look around.
The seriousness of reality and its truth,
Is being destroyed.
By violence, crime, deception, fraud and theft.
Who is observed doing it?
The clowns, fools and those ignorant.
People can't get enough of it.
They worship this mess.'

'That's one of the most craziest analogies,
I have ever heard.'

'Such elegant, dramatic pageantry,
Believers give to their religious affiliations.
The Bible is filled with violence.
Family betrayal, liars, deceivers and thieves!'


'It's a lot like going to church,
To first hear a sermon slowly begin...
With a doing to capture the attention,
Of the congregation.
Then with an hour or more given,
To what the devil and demons do.
As the preacher cools down the tension.
While the choir sings something uplifting.
That guarantees donations solicited,
By a 'money walk' down aisles...
Towards collection baskets,
Contributes a faithful statement made...
To all who witness and observe the sham!'

'You mean...shame, right?'

It is a shameless sham,
Allowed to keep perpetuated.'

'What a blasphemous observation.
What a heathenistic comment to make!'

'Have you ever noticed,
Most churches are in poverty zones.
And those who have achieved success,
Drive in from the suburbs to ignore...
Those on the streets hungry and homeless.
With a doing to address and claim,
The pretentiousness of their 'Christianity.
While in those churches making sure,
They are seen nodding their heads...
In approval to everything the minister says!'


Betrayal, fraud and deception!'
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Written on December 20, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 20, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on December 20, 2022

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