lpahtillah
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Thank you for your comments.

Hi amandak. Much do I appreciate your comment. LSP

LOL...Thank you jackg.2631 for commenting on 'Said To Say'. My poetic submissions can be not the easiest to interpret. I remember my mother telling me as I was a child, 'Do as I say. Then one day both of us will understand what I've said to you means!' There are times when clarity is not meant to be explained. Especially if to come from someone else's point of view. more »

So much I appreciate the responses I have received for my poetic submissions. And, after so many countless of years too. I can only express 'thank you'. Lawrence

Hi, Dianejean57. Thank you once again. Lawrence

Hi, alexw.30385, thank you. This poem is more a reflection of myself. Yes. Many years ago, having interests in the performing arts, taking lessons in this and that. I loved to sing, dance and play baseball. I began taking acting lessons. Yep! Thinking it was easy. As I grew up, I was told my own words to say, was not accepted. I thought 'this' was acting. Now I realize how difficult it is to make look easy. It isn't. I don't say 'Yes' to anything anymore. Until I know exactly what's involved. Thank you again. Lawrence more »

Kendal? Your 'One Tomorrow', in my opinion, is fantastic. It's simplicity say more than your words express.
Inspirational it is! Thank you. Lawrence

Hi, Kendal...as I age and grow older I've begun to realize we may all appear to have different life experiences. Yet, how we feel inside?
Is familiar. lsp

Thank you, Dianejean 57. Your poem, 'My White Dove' is very interesting. I have experienced seeing 'Morning Doves' They are kind of golden brown in color. I am told Doves appear to people who are peaceful and blessed. But few are familiar with 'Morning Doves'. Almost like a Rose most perceive are just red in color but are not. I really liked your poem. Thanks again for sharing. Peace/Blessings, Lawrence more »

Hi, Dianejean...so much do I appreciate your comments. Yes. When time permits and soon, I'll read your submissions as well. Thanks again, Peace/Blessings. Lawrence

Hi, Soul_00. Very much dud I enjoy your comments. All of us who are 'fortunate& blessed to witness these times. Have been given the freedom to both 'imagine and obsorb' what to us is presented. Yet, so many believe to assume, they can rule and control over what is happening. To have been deluded and fictioned historically. This experience of life we have, is not of our creation to decide which way of life is best for everyone to live. Thank you once again for your comments. lsp more »

So much I relate to your 'God Knocked On My Heart' especially the line when God asks, 'How high you wanna fly?' Very nice. lsp

Hi,amandak, much do I appreciate your reading my 'criticisms'. We all experience some form of this. Again, thank you.

Thank you, Dianejean57.

Chris? 'Wrapped Up In You'...is brilliantly written. From beginning to end. Yes! Within your expression so much you allow to confess just how you feel. After MANY years of my own poetic writings, I am only recently unpeeling to reveal what it is deeply felt. Easy I've become to realize isn't easy. Thank you. L more »