Sorrow



The times when i felt like
I shouldn't live anymore
The times when i felt her tears,
The times when it doesn't seem anywhere
The times when i felt own fears..

I asked it when
Where did you left,
Leaving us somewhere
Between tides and cleft..

Pleaded to it
To carry us to shore,
Have some mercy
To not make us cry anymore..

The times when no hope can be seen
The times when i felt bleak,
The times when i took her in arms
I never felt so strong and yet so weak..

I don't want her to leave me
I don't want her to be hurt,
I don't want us to feel hopeless
I don't want her to feel like dirt..

I can hear her sobs
From next room,
I wanna go there
To take away her gloom..

Again i pleaded to it
To gimme some strength,
But still it's nowhere to be found
Only hear the silent length..

The sorrow is heavy on shoulders
I can carry my own but not hers,
The life is miserable before and in future
But i can carry my own  not hers..
not hers..

About this poem

When face a heart wrenching grief, words tumble out in some manner.

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Written on October 25, 2022

Submitted by twinkle2000rani on October 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXBX XCBC DAEA XFXF EGXG XHBH DIXI JJXJJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 944
Words 219
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

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